As we lay there
Wave-beaten hearts, turned cold with guilt
As we lay there
There in our wretched past
There
There where we were to breathe our last
And die to death…
We were dying
Deep into death
Out from there we spotted a lone feather fall
The feather of a dove
White and pure
In our hands blackened
…with dog-living
We cradled that seemingly inanimate hope
Now we say we will lay there no more
…no more will we lay there
We come to you
Faith-deficient, love-forgotten, peace in flames
We come to you
Heart-broken, mind battered, soul-shackled
And trace that evidence of purity back
…back to the height from which it fell
And we find you…
With the dove in your hands
We bring the filth-coated feather back
Our discoloured clothing back
For we know, when we stretch out from there
And step into the light
…You will look upon our now polka-dotted overalls
Take us into you arms
...and smile
nice poem. I'm guessing it talks about salvation... i like the imagery you created: we lie in our filthy sins, awaiting death, but just a single feather of holiness gives us faith, and this faith leads us to salvation... God is indeed a merciful God to forgive us our sins... and you have perfectly captured this awesome nature of God in your poem. amazing.
ReplyDeleteI think the most important thing is not staying where you fell. if you pick yourself up, with all your injuries, all the filth, and find or should i repeat, trace your way back, that is all He needs. like the return of the Prodigal Son, the first thing he did when his son got to him was to EMBRACE him...and that to me, is significant! God sure is merciful.
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